My poem ""WHY??""

I think thats a really good poem :)

Thanks nwms20013

I wrote it about 10 years ago I was in a bad place but im a lot better now but like to look back on it if I am having a bad day I remindas me things could be a lot worse ya’know.

its really good…I write poems and I hate when people say it sux or something because it came from my heart and no one can take that awayy… :)

No, it isnt a good poem, it needs a lot of work and you dont just put flying commas everywhere. You dont put spaces inbetween them either.

You need to change the wording.

Mkkk…intresting. Revision: Why have I done this to my life? I’m alienated; alone.

Why is it that I’m afraid to love? that I hate the people who walk by?

I can’t get close but maybe I should.

Try if you like; others have failed. Like my mother, who’s in the bathroom; crying.

Now I see; they can never change me.

I am me. I love myself. but… I need to change.