my poem!! rate it ?

your like a drug.. somthing thats way too addicting. somthing that controls my body. somthing that I need to get out of my system.

your like a bad dream. somthing I cant control. somthing im scared of.

? thats it for now its not finished!!

Answer #1

Thats really good! Keep it going! Only thing is, check your spelling - your is supposed to be you’re. =)

Answer #2

Pretty good, pretty good.

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