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So for my class we have to write a poem and I wrote this one... Tell me what you think...
Your face arrives again All hope I had becomes surreal But under your cover's More torture than pleasure And just past your lips There's more anger than laughter Not now or forever will I ever change you I know that to go on I'll break you, my habit
its hard to understand, but im only 16 lol... and to me a poem should rhyme
but its still really really really good.
luv it ! :) poetry is beautiful and amazing and you don't even have to unerstand it. and urs is good. :)
kind of hard to understand but its a good poem
what is your poem about?
thats niceee.
:)
Nice!
