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Is my poem somewhat good or horrible?
Okay hehehe I was wondering if you guys can b brutaly honest & tell me if my poem is sumwht good or horrible. Please b honest..thnx..ily
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- by:amairanny d.A girl once dreamed.. She dreamed to be with hem She dreamed of the happiness They’d share. She dreamed of how life would b If he felt for her Wht she felt for hem. A girl once wished.. She wished upon a star She wished god would help him realize Realize wht he couldn’t yet see. She wished he didn’t see her as “just a friend” She wished one day he could Actualy be hers.. She wished for da day.. Da day he’d tell her he loves her. A girl once had hope She hoped deyd last Forever more.. She hoped da fire Would never burn out.. She hoped she would never See a day in life without hem. ..& when all went wrong When clouds turnd grey & flowers dried up When da birds stoped chirping & Da fire burnt out The girl.. She still still had hope..
if you’re going to bother posting a poem on here for other people to read, how about making sure the spelling and grammar is correct?
“hem” —> “him” “b” —> “be” “da” —> “the”
if you’re going to use ellipses, they’re THREE dots, not two. like this…
as for the poem, it’s not that great. it has no rhythm to it and you can really, really tell a teenager wrote it.
thats sounds like me… :( sad. and happy, I guess :D haha oh well, maybe one day
wow I like it!
ye this is quiet good !!!
well done
and btw you r pretty &&
I liked it a lot! Nice Poem!
nice one
It’s pretty good, just run it thought Word or something to fix the spelling mistakes. And thank you so much for realising that the meaning of a poem is much more important than making every single line rhyme.
oh well this peom come from the heart OHSARA and I think that yeah she could work on the spelling and stuff but it’s deep and not all poems have rythm^
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