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In English we have to make up a book of poems that we wrote. One of them is an “I am” poem and I don’t know if it’s good or not.

I am quiet and unique I wonder if it’’s all real I hear music in my thoughts I see her holding me as a baby as she died I want to know more I am quiet and unique

I pretend he’s not there I feel lonesome I touch the pencil to the blank paper I worry I cry over nothing I am quiet and unique

I understand I say I dream I try my hardest I hope to I am quiet and unique

Any suggestions for the empty spaces? I can’t think of anything deep and meaningful.

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Answer #1

I worry about my family?

I understand that lifes not always fair I say if I think I can I can I dream of achieving everything I try to reach for the stars I hope to one day grab a star for my family.

Answer #2

You are not supposed to “think” of anything deep and meaningful. It kinda has to come naturally.. Just try getting in touch with your deepest thoughts. And maybe use metafors that always works

Answer #3

its so great!!!

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