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Hey first time poster just wondering what you think of these lyrics! All comments welcome!

How do they get right there, These images words that are not mine. Stray thoughts out of control, Ending in tears as the process ends The process comes to an end.

There are things we dont understand Things that will just be labelled and Given as much of the meds they need To sedate them to kill their apathy.

Failing not by choice but through their eyes They cant see just how well I have done To wake up in the morning to jump out of bed But they are starting to think its all in my head I can see what your thinking im not being paranoid I know what your saying when im not around You just dont believe when I say I suffer from voices images that arent mine!

Shut down, drink up, stay inside, fall out Shut down, drink up, stay inside, fall out Close down f* up, left outside, limp out

Limp out of this race, things never get better Pull over let everyone through whilst thinking Would the ending be better if it were cut short Would the ending be better if it were to die tonight

There are things we dont understand Things that will just be labelled and Given as much of the meds they need To sedate them to kill all their apathy The ending may just be tonight!!

Silent killer lurks within, with a force thats all consuming Time for noise to try to blank out, this entity all this fear!

Too late! Its latched itself on, wont slip its grip Its waiting for me to fall down. Stay alert its shut off my senses, cant exert any more pressure! To try for release, release from its over growing buriel ground.

Existence becomes a waste of space with no room to settle to grow, When he’s constantly in there watching through my eyes breathing the air He mimics my every movement he knows what I will do in any given situation Latch on at birth and he found a good home, residing within me he has grown

This war is unwinable he will not give but I will not fall Reddend face im showing my disgrace of not being able to Not being able to keep a hold of my own mind, so ill just die.

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Answer #1

oh didnt realise that I accidently put 2 songs up there lol, the couple of dotted lines should seperate them

and thanks

Answer #2

oh didnt realise that I accidently put 2 songs up there lol, the couple of dotted lines should seperate them

Answer #3

more den your voice rate…

Answer #4

pretty good. =]

Answer #5

true, but I didnt really use proper grammer on them and whilst playing around with the guitar to them it can be fitted in.

Answer #6

WHAT ABOUT THESE 2 THEN IM DONE HONEST LOL

same old process, repeated lines, im not auditioning for a major part. act one comes and, the curtain falls somewhere in the background I will stay at least I will stay.

a shadow creeping through the silence of a morgue resisting temptation to join the inhabitents stuttering stumbling anything to get by the lazy hand takes to the gun and watches it drop

no use for small talk I rarely have anything to say any speech always ends up as an attempt at a joke not quite sure do they laugh at me or is it with to be honest though its not like a really care I have my world, where my existence makes me the lead role

there was one time where I thought it was hopeless there was one time where I couldnt imagine this this is one time where I look at all the positives this will be the last time I take my life for granted.

follow the wrong shepherd, sheep dogs push you the way down a one way street that, leads to another dead end

they fill your chalice with those lies that ultimately will posion you. you obey the recruitment call and it will be your demise.

they attack its called terrorism we attack its called just a war!! they attack its called terrorism we attack its called just a war!

they stand up on their podiums they act like their god preaching down to those less able to see throught the fog the haze the mist what ever you want to call it I know for a fact its a load of bullshit!!

how can one nation be allowed to police the world when they should look closer to home and see their faults maybe a look a meaningful look will inhabit change the world may then try to follow suit, follow suit!

they attack its called terrorism