How do you like my song?

Song Title: Hoping on a Thought

From the start of the end, I wish it was changeable, Everything to be switched around, Nothing seems to go the way, Nothing that left the ground.

Distance is my separation, The source that feeds my desperation, Gripping onto that feeling, Nothing will let it go.

I told you bout the time, You still havent left my mind, And I try not to let you go.

There is no time to wait, No time to change my fate.

The final decision in the end, Is your conscience in the mend.

Wishing you would accept me, Turns out you would only reject me.

Answer #1

ha thanks, these comments mean a lot to me (: and yea don’t worry this is just a rough draft, ill probably end up adding onto it, maybe ill make another one tonight, im kinda in the mood to express some emotion in words right now (:

Answer #2

sorry if its too short, I try and model my lyrics after neil youngs style, it seems to short, but most of it is guitar playing, so I try and convey my lyrics and emotion through guitar

Answer #3

I like it =) and I like your neil young idea!

Answer #4

thanks, im working on another song right now (:

Answer #5

this is so cool! I wish I could write songs as half as good as you could. this its so good! I LOVE it

Answer #6

teehee(: I love it matt! (: (: (: I wish it was longer thoo :
but I love it(: and I love the meaning and how parts of it rhyme(:

Answer #7

its sounds like your in a lot of heartache…whatever you went threw im sorry. its good but its more like a poem to me

Answer #8

song? I thought song included music. I only see words

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