HAY YO TELL ME IF YALL LIKE MY RAP SONG ??

I fall down a flight of steps landed on my head my faice is alvayse rad im glad that im ganna be dead sum day I shot a police man after he saide “FREEZE GET DOWN ON YOUR KNEES” fu*k peace maney turnd me to satan I stabed a man showd up at his opand casket filld it up with explosive gases and klosed it back up with a lit match in it blowd it up rold him up(his ashes) smouckt him up if you are broucke go rub a shop im hordar than a rok my mom heat me with a remout I chouckt and aite her dog I will leave evryone shockt after I smouck a white rok knock you are salf out with a brick if you think that I can’t spit

Answer #1

I’d tell you…if I could read it lol :P Just correct your spellings and maybe seperate it into versus and add a chorus : )

Answer #2

you stole parts of that from eminem you are bad at this and you are a thief

Answer #3

that sounds wack mate… Like what the f*$k man rap is not about violence but expressing yourself it shouldn’t be dangerous and if it’s real than you put in a way that it ain’t offencive and put into a good experience.

Answer #4

nope- don’t like it.

Answer #5

Can’t even read it, really.

Answer #6

LOL…def sounds like rap…retarded…

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