Poem for my boy

read the write… lol this is for you reyn!!!

How come ever time I take one step closer, he takes one step back! Knowing that my heart is broken, he continues to smile! All the stupid mistakes that hes done, I still unconditionally love him! he was the only 1 that knew about my problems at home! He kept them locked in his heart like they were his own! I loved him like no other. nad I’m NOT ahsamed to admit it. I want to love him like no other, because I though he was my lover. He was my savior! He was the one that always new when I need saved without a word spoken! I just want to say, As the tears roll down my face, and my make-up black and runny, I dont want to live another dday, without you beside me hunny! He was my angle sent down from heaven! with those blach wings and converse to match, he always had the key to my heart! As I lie here now lifeless, my veins fill with concrete, because my angle has left, and YOU can’t possibly know how to SAVE ME!!!

Answer #1

HAHA.. thanx yall!!! really do appriciate. it.

the erason iwote this.. is b/c I though I would nvr see him again.. and it was a way for me to tell him that I really do love him and him acctually know I do!!!

Answer #2

WoO0W! I love it its sweet!

Answer #3

AWLLL that WAS SO SWEET ♥

Answer #4

I have a boyfriend.. and NO its NOT the one I wrote the poem for!!! but the one li wrote the poem for is like a brother!! so yup yup!! :)

Answer #5

WOW! that was deep…wel done, you really have a way with words!

Answer #6

wow that was really deep, its grate

Answer #7

aww I love it its sooo awesome!!!

                   ♥♥♥
Answer #8

aww that rocked!!! that is so sweet of you!!

Answer #9

awh..I like this sooo much…

Answer #10

wow! that was tight

Answer #11

u got a way with words darlin

Answer #12

wow your realy talented … that was awesome lol …

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