DO YOU LIKE THIS POEM

OK WELL I THINK ITS SAD …

Blood falls from the ceiling … Ropes tightly hug my neck…tears dripping from my eyes… my skin goes pail my bones go limp…. Swinging back and forth…..Leaving the room silent and cold….. A sense of sadness overcomes the room…. leaving it empty and bear

Answer #1

not all poems have to rhyme casssx3!

Answer #2

I wouldnt call it a poem?

Answer #3

awsome!:) :)

Answer #4

I think its wicked awesome!! you got talent

Answer #5

IT WAS A POETRY CONTEST FOR 150$ I DONT REALLY FEEL THAT WAY

Answer #6

ummm thats alittle disturbing but you do have quite a talent

Answer #7

yea its good I have one similar

Answer #8

yeah thats reall good. good job!

Answer #9

wooow thats kinda creepy lol

Answer #10

it’s really good!

Answer #11

very talented, good luck, I hope you win!!

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