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Do you like this poem my friend wrote? tell me your opinions on it.

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Look at that boy! he can’t even hear me. Look, boy! don’t come near me. But inside that boy lies something worlds aparts, for my boy, It is his heart

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Better than most of the poetry posted on here. This sounds more like a possible pop song though. I would avoid the repetitive rhyming, its boring. Also you need better word choice. Think more creatively. I definitely like the attitude of this poem though, its refreshing.

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