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It's a first draft, so feel free to be extremely harsh. :)

I hate you Because You Hate Me What did I do? Help me to see. I don't understand it I did nothing bad But you still hit me Just stop it, Dad. Why do you do this? It's evil It's sad You said that you hate me I love you too, Dad

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