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Dark and shattered soul

Please tell me what you think I need to know. Dark and shattered souls My soul is dark and shattered forever I’ve learned to hold it in together You mean that I look happy and together But I’m not so good bye forever. The end:)

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Answer #1

I think that I would but that all depends on how much positive feed back that I get. I hope I will someday. thanks for the comments. LOVE ALWAYS, EMODANCER.

Answer #2

do you think you would ever get your work published? because it’s really good

Answer #3

its nice. a little more to it would be good though.

Answer #4

nice. you write poetry a lot? I do too. I love writing poems. I never show anybody because they say they’re emo and stuff. but I really liked what you wrote. anything else you have? maybe I’ll show you some of mine. talk to me, marybeth

Answer #5

I really want to say thanks for the feed back. marybeth I do write a lot funmail me your nuber or whatever and we can see what you’ve got. probably better than mine though. lol :)

Answer #6

I really like it

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