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Do you think this new poem makes sense?

Blue Dragon Asked by noname55alanna 9 months ago, 9 answers.

Hey, I'm back again this time its a poem for school and I'm not exactly sure whether, even if it does make sense, if I used the definition of the words correctly. Can you help me? If I used any of the words wrong please tell me and if you like it and its not confusing let me know. Here it is:

I Am Poem(-I didn't give it a name because I still have to ask my teacher if she wants us to.)

I am extrovert and introvert,
I wonder how the world has gotten so taciturn and frigid.
I hear the articulation, the enunciation of the future,
I see a more acceptable world.
I want to attain my dreams and desires,
I am extrovert and introvert.

I pretend to be someone everyday of my life,
I feel indecorous in this world.
I touch and bequeath every heart that I am able,
I worry about what’s to come in the future.
I cry inside for a ameliorate understanding,
I am extrovert and introvert.

I understand that this life is meant to test me,
I say work your hardest to progress.
I dream for a truth that is beneath all this chaos,
I try to assist as much as I can.
I hope this life I live here is not unjust and wayward,
I am extrovert and introvert.

The first two words of each sentence are what she, my teacher, told us to start off with but everything after that was me. Please let me know what you opinion is. Thanks!
~Alanna

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hogwarts express Answered by harryhpdr555 on Sep 13, 2007, 04:57PM
| 142 answers.

it makes sense 2 me I thought it was so good

Answered by andrewd93 on Sep 13, 2007, 09:58PM
| 53 answers.

rele good job it made snse to me

Random Flower Answered by britz14 on Sep 14, 2007, 09:04AM
| 386 answers.

It seemed like a pretty good poem, and to me it makes perfect sense.

hh Answered by oneheartnow on Sep 17, 2007, 01:14AM
| 753 answers.

It's a great poem. Makes a lot of sense.

hh Answered by oneheartnow on Sep 17, 2007, 01:14AM
| 753 answers.

It's a great poem. Makes a lot of sense.

hh Answered by oneheartnow on Sep 17, 2007, 01:14AM
| 753 answers.

It's a great poem. Makes a lot of sense.

Me Answered by leigh92 on Sep 18, 2007, 12:57PM
| 42 answers.

I think this is an awesome piece of art work and you are very talented! Of course it makes sence!

PWT's rock!!! Answered by plainwhitets on Dec 17, 2007, 05:02PM
| 571 answers.

I love it!

ugh......not a good pic lol (very tired) Answered by vultureofculture on Apr 02, 2008, 05:29PM
| 333 answers.

what they said
they beat me to it

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