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What do you think of this poem??

jpg Asked by mayouya 5 months ago, 1 answer.

ok...I wrote this poem 4 my boyfriend ...but I'm not sure if it's good enough 2 give it 2 him...so tell me honestly what do you think about it...
thnx happyhappy

I will never stop loving u
...

```
when you look me in my eyes
it tells you what you mean 2 me
and when I look deep into urz
de hole world is what I see

a world that welcomes me with open arms
a world which I wanna share with you a world that is filled with love
a world so perfect and true

the way you make me feel
I never thought it could be so real
the way you make me feel everyday
is more than any words can say

I love you more than any words can say
I feel it growing in ma heart each and everyday
I love how much you care
the love you show is beyond compare

you give me something no one else has ever givin me
it's something you can't see
love so strong and so true
it makes me think of only you this wonderful feeling you have givin me
makes me wanna be with you endlessly...

I love the way you let me know
how much you love me so
don't worry your the only one 4 me
u I every one else can see
that I love you with all ma heart
and nothing could ever make us apart

I thought of you today
but that is nothing new
I thought of you yesterday and the day before that 2
today...tomorrow...my hole life through
I will never stop loving u...
```the very las part I got it from the net (just 2 be honst happyhappy hehe

Answered by badwolf3 on Jun 20, 2009, 12:44PM
10 answers

Nice, easily understood when your in love.

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