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Poem, what do you think??

Asked by minalae 10 months ago, 3 answers.

You said you knew, so I let you in,
Lying to me is your common sin
I know you help me, but it makes it worse
Everything we change becomes a curse
Seeing your plans
Knowing your game
Makes me angry that you can't take the blame
I may not care, but...

neither do you
You've found parts of me that I never knew,
But that doesn't mean you can make me see,
The piece of me that I don't want to be.

Answered by maceydear on Jan 20, 2009, 10:31PM
19 answers

wow.
You write beauitiful poetry. I think its very good (:

Answered by alkane on Jan 21, 2009, 08:22AM
522 answers

We're doing Sylvia Plath in school (some great poet), that's better then all of hers.

Answered by minalae on Jan 21, 2009, 03:50PM
273 answers

thanx ali!! I'll put more up if you want...

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