Poem! do you like it?

This is a poem based on winston churchill's quote, if your going though hell keep going

If you’re going through hell.

If you’re going through hell; keep going- winston churchill

The wretched luck crashes down
And drowns you in your blissful...

gown
But swim just swim against the tide
And your soaked will soon be dried

The hurtful words that cut and splice
Leaving you but shattered ice
But melt just melt and freeze again
And your shattered self will quickly mend

The ground that takes, but never grants
Reaches for your hand
But deny it just deny its poison plants
And longer you will stand

The fire that burns your inner spell
Continues to scorch your mind
But keep going just going through hell
Cause it’ll pass, unravel, unwind.

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