Anyone like my poem

I lie here wishing I was dead
Because of this painful dread
Wishing you were by my side
Me knowing that . That is a lie
I wish it wasn't but there is nothing I can do
So why should I care why should I live
Why should I live in this painful dread
You never cared. But you said you did
Why do you even act as if you once did.
I really cared. But you never though of what
Would happen if you threw that dart .
I wish you would had cared but I
Loved you once an you didn't care so why sould I live in this
Painful dreaded world

you have a talent but the poem is really dark1!!!

I love this poem.. I write stuff just like it.. it makes me think of when I was actually doing what you are writting about!

but FANTASTIC POEM!!!