Please comment on my poem.

It hasn't got a name, you can come up with one for it if you like.

Each time I cry,
I hear all the angels laughs,
and all the devils turn their backs.
I noted what you like, and what you don't,
so I could please you in hope that hate me; you...

won't.
I changed my opinions, I changed my style,
but still you tut and think I'm vile.
I make a comment and you mock me,
I fill with shame and still don't know who I should be.
After all you've put me through,
Sometimes I want to give up on you.
You spit and stare at me with evil eyes,
but still I reply with a smile made of lies.
You're always right and I could never be,
I want to be loved for who I am- I want the real me...to be set free.

woah thats deep...but very professional and well written...love it

loved it!!

I love it!!! it's very good!

thats friggin amazing!!!

Nice job - hope you find happiness !!

wow thats really good! very serious. I loveth it!!

wow thats deep. thats exactly how I feel about this guy so it really touched me. keep on writing I love your style.