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I wrote another poem. I am not sure if it is good are not. Please tell me if you like it or not.
Trapped in a room Left here to die I’m screaming out my final cries The shackles rough that bind my feet I wish I had something to eat Deprived of water food and air I live my life without a care I’ve sunken into great despair The pain is brutal The hours long All I do is sing this song Day after day Night after night I continue to try and put up a fight The chains are coarse I feel remorse I cannot go on any longer No matter what I say or do I cannot become any stronger The weight of this burden is crushing my soul When I look inside I see a black hole A hole that is dark, consuming and grim I pull out a knife and everything dims
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I like your wordchoice and your descriptions. It was all very clear. Good job. FunMail me for my poems sometime. They’re pretty smilar.
thats awsome really like life my life anyways
it’s really good. I love it!
I LOVE this poem! it simplifies my life. you should be a dark poet. you know, one of those anonymous ones. all of your poems are really good.
hmmm… some of the lines are a bit …blunt.., if ya get me…
Nice and dark…
omg! I LOVE this poem. I read your other poemes to. I also LOVED them to! you r a great poem writer!
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