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What do you think of my love poem?

Asked by 1234599 9 months ago, 12 answers.
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one of my few love poems lol

A Dozen Roses

A dozen roses I give to you my friend
A gift that seems so small
But they represent so much
our friendship most of all.

A rose for the friendship
a rose for the touch
a rose for the trust we share
our sharing means so much.

A rose for the kindness
And the deep caring you show
A rose for the comfort given
When I've been feeling low.

A rose for the laughter
how it makes your eyes shine
a rose for the dreams we share
it’s amazing how they intertwine.

A rose for the deep respect
you give to me with ease
a rose for the love we feel
and how you wish to please.

A rose for your compassion
that has helped me in so many ways
a rose for bringing me sunshine
that has brightened all my days.

The last rose is the best
for it stands so proud and tall
this rose represents you
my best friend of all.

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Answered by haileybre on Oct 10, 2007, 03:55PM
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YES!
this one is totally rad!!
im in love with it!!!
and its a HAPPY poem!!!
ahhh I love it!

touche`

Answered by funadvice on Oct 10, 2007, 04:28PM
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...cliched.

Answered by underwaterophelia on Oct 10, 2007, 04:31PM
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The rhythm here is way off, and it's very distracting in this type of poem. Maybe try to make it flow better?

Answered by haileybre on Oct 10, 2007, 07:44PM
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dang...
she's a real critic.

Answered by amblessed on Oct 10, 2007, 09:28PM
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Very Nice !!

Answered by funadvice on Oct 10, 2007, 10:41PM
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>>>she's a real critic.

She's right, though: this type of poem needs a meter. It's unbearable otherwise.

Answered by ladysyrah on Oct 11, 2007, 09:18AM
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VERY NICE!

Answered by ynot on Oct 13, 2007, 02:48AM
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Very nice, but it is like watching a poorly edited movie. Keep tweaking it a bit.

Answered by chrisabo on Jan 09, 2008, 08:34PM
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plagiarize much. what is the point of copying another persons work and trying to pass it off as your own..especially on the internet..who are you trying to impress.

Answered by chrisabo on Jan 09, 2008, 08:35PM
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plagiarize much. what is the point of copying another persons work and trying to pass it off as your own..especially on the internet..who are you trying to impress.