Love and loveless poem, what do you think?

if you think that I am weird then your wrong. I am misunderstood. I am always told that I am an amazing poetry writer. heres a poem that I hope you will like. I am sorry if you don't like it. I just need to know if this is an ok poem or not.

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LOVE AND LOVELESS
I am a girl with ice blue eyes
my hair is as black as the midnight sky (dirty brown)
my face is always down in a frown except when my friend cheney is around
she puls me up and makes me smile
but then when she's gone I am dead for a while
she makes this life of mine so much easier for me
she makes my life fun and comes to me when asked
she has the touch of an angel I guess
she has the true love of a friend the is
and I am the on who is the loveless end
I try to be happy to show her I care
but then when shes around theres no way that not fair
she makes my life fun and totally easy
and makes it a small game for her to try and tease me.

POST ANY COMMENTS OR PREJUDICES THAT YOU MAY HAVE I DON'T CARE BECAUSE I KNOW THAT SHE IS ALWAYS GOING TO BE HERE. THANKS AGAIN. BYE-BYE.

[tears and cries] that was beautiful...

lol I liked it! it's so...strong!! and meaningful...
nice poem!

OMG your awesome!!
I love your poems

yea its very amazing, but im not kind of person who understand poetry very well, so you r in love with your best friend? thats what im getting from that

Kick AS*!!!

I like it. it's awesome

it was all iiight

That made me feel good, Randi.

thank you cheney.

I've red your poems they make me cry with happiness, do you have a book out if you do funmail me were I can get it, if you dont then what are you w8ting 4 funmail me when your masta pieces are open to the world

some spots didn't really flow,
but I think it expresses emotion really really really well,
describes feeling I have,
wow
keep writing
xx minalae