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My heart is beating for the pleasure of knowing you, Your eyes the color of the clouds so blue, They say that theres no love like your first, It feels like my heart is about to burst,

I know I loved you as we walked hand in hand, Your special and sweet and thats my only demand, Whispered phrases slap me in the face as we walk in the hall, As I look at him I realize that he is not my only and my all,

I take my hand away from his as I refuse to look him in the eye, I turn around and with a sad voice I choke out goodbye, My heart slows to a stop as I slowly walk away, He stands in sadness with his hands in his pockets unsure of what to say,

I stop at my locker as people stare at me, I scream “Why can’t just leave me be, The whispers stop and the crowds shuffle on, I realized I was being played like a useless pawn,

Tears flow from me eyes in a waterfall of salt, I shake my head reminded how its all my fault, He was using me to get with his ex and If only before I knew, How Could I ever think are love was true,

I take a deep breathe and hold my head high, Big deal, so he wasn’t the right guy, There is some boy somewhere who is perfect for me, And together forever me and him will be

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Answer #1

thank so nice

Answer #2

that was beautiful I write poems too there mostly sad

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