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I need feedback on my poem

Asked by fau 3 months ago, 2 answers.

When I use to live wit my auntie my uncle use to cheat on her and she never left him this is a poem I wrote long time ago tell me if you like it honest opinion

It takes a strong women

It takes strong woman
To be in love with a man
When she knows he's not treating her right

It takes a strong woman
To not confront her man
When he didn't come home last night

It takes a strong woman
To close her eyes
And not see what is in front of her face

It takes a strong woman
To keep up her man's lies
When another woman is taking her place

It takes a strong woman
To sacrifice her own happiness
Just to make her house a home

It takes a strong woman
To live with a cheating man
Instead of living alone

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At Eurodisney with awesome face paint Answered by lex_icon on May 27, 2008, 01:34AM
| 1119 answers.

That's a very powerful poem- well done!

Out by the lake! Answered by djwager on May 27, 2008, 09:15AM
| 474 answers.

I like it, very meaningful

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