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I've made my mistakes, I've let you in. I don't deserve this. I blame myself for everything you've led me to believe. You've led me on. Do you know how I feel? Do you care? I don't think so. Maybe you should think a little. You like things the way they are? Well I can't stop myself from loving you. Don't give me up. But don't let me fall. Will you be there for me when I crash and burn? Don't let me go. I need you.

I just sent this to the guy it was about even though I wrote it a few months ago.