Do you like this song

Asked by volleeit18 3 months ago, 5 answers.

I wrote a song, honest opinions please...

Nightmare:

The night has fallen so peacefully
The dark has come, now surrounding me
And I, I’ve lost my sight

The day has put up quite a fight
But now I’m left standing here
Facing the dark, my...

greatest fear

And this whole thing is like a nightmare
Waking me up in great despair
Taking all it get from my dreams
ripping my reality from the seems
This whole thing is like a night mare
Leaving me breathless, in a scare
This whole thing is like a nightmare

The dusk has said its last goodbye
Darkness left to claim the sky
And I, I start to fall asleep

In my heart the sun I keep
But once the moon breaks the black
I can’t remember where its at

And this whole thing is like a nightmare
Waking me up in great despair
Taking all it get from my dreams
ripping my reality from the seems
This whole thing is like a night mare
Leaving me breathless, in a scare
This whole thing is like a nightmare

Breaking reality my dreams unfold
Technicolor thoughts break the mold
Dream catchers lost and gone

I’m trying my hardest to keep holding on
But you’re making it to hard to set free
Cause you’re like a reoccurring nightmare to me

And this whole thing is like a nightmare
Waking me up in great despair
Taking all it get from my dreams
ripping my reality from the seems
This whole thing is like a night mare
Leaving me breathless, in a scare
This whole thing is like a nightmare

The night has fallen so peacefully
The dark has come, now surrounding me
And I, I’ve lost my sight

The day has put up quite a fight
But now I’m left standing here
Facing the dark, my greatest fear

Answered by funadvice on Jul 30, 2009, 06:05PM
53902 answers

Sounds like a Cure song left on the shelf. 'mare' 'scare' 'nightmare' - too obvious, not gripping enough.

Answered by stewie06151985 on Jul 30, 2009, 06:19PM
59 answers

it could be a devil wears prada screaming song I dont know bout the cure tho dont like that band I like the lyrics not deep enough tho happy

Answered by funadvicegirl1020 on Jul 30, 2009, 06:36PM
4 answers

I like it..(: the lyrics are good...

Answered by sethpatto on Jul 30, 2009, 08:47PM
218 answers

I really like it!
only thing.
Taking all it get from my dreams
do you mean Taking all *I* get from my dreams??
great song. makes me wanna sing it.
good on ya!