Dear mother,

This is another poem of my. Just tell me if you like it or not and be honest.

Dear mother,
I'm sorry to say
But I wont be home today
That this will be last time you see my face
And my whole life will be erase
This will be the last time you...

hear my voice
I just have to let you know that this was my choice
To just let this be the end of me
So I can finally be free
When you read this, you might cry
But I want you to know I'll be watching you in the sky
And when people ask what happened to me
I want you to know that she just wanted to be free
To get away from her distress
For she was in a lot of stress
That she loved and cared for everyone
And now her real life has begun
Mom, I have always loved you
And you know that, too
But right now, I'm about to be away
And I just want to let you know that I love you everyday
This might cause you to seriously cry
But this is the last goodbye

yes, this poem actually made me cry. I love poems like this, I would really love to read another.

Well written but it's message doesn't reflect a Happy Heart.

That was a really good poem, I just hope that it isn't based on future events. But there was one thing that seemed a little odd, it was the lines To get away from her distress,
For she was in a lot of stress It's just that it sounded a little strange because they both had the word stress as the root of the word, so it sounded repetitive and was odd to read. But other than that, I really liked it.

hey, thx to asdfg63plus1 for giving me that mistake, I wrote a better part for one of the lines.

To get away from her distress
From her all her tensions, yes

oh wow, I love this soo much, I was like in tears!

Yeah.
Well done for coppying and pasting m'dear

Yea, your new line sounds a lot better IMO, and you're welcome, you said to be honest, and so I did just that

So sad but really good and touching. I wish I was THAT good at it! You are a natural.