What's a second chance? (poem)

This is a poem I just wrote. I know it's not great, so, don't be to hard on me. but I do want your oppinion. So tell me what you think and what I could change to make it better! TY!

What's a Second Chance?

I never was a bad kid
I did everything I...

was told
But then something happened
And my life turned so cold

I have changed a lot since then
And done some really bad things
I just did what ever I wanted
As if I had wings

No one could tell me what to do
Everything was about me
I just wanted to get away from here
I just wanted to break free

My past has ruined my life for me
It has made me who I have become
And I know no one is proud of that
But nothing can be undone

Nothing can be undone
But everything can be changed
And that is what I have accomplished
My bad ways have been exchanged

But no one see's the person I am now
I'm not the same rebel I was
And I don't know why I changed
I guess it was just a because

But since I've done some things in the past
No one trusts me at all
Not even if I just take a walk
I just want to give up and fall

What can I do to prove to you
That things have really change
I just want to grow up now
No more stupid games

I am done being a child
Now and forever
I know it's taken me awhile
But if you look, I have recovered

I am more mature now
And would really like my space
You don't have to worry no more
Because I now found my place

I don't feel the need, to fit in with everyone else
I just want to be me
I just want some trust
Can't you see?

amazing

oh wow this poem is so nice damn girl, you know what it explains my life, I was 1st such a good girl and then my whole life went just the way you wrote the poem, wow nice poem

Great poem, it's really beautiful and true. I like it a lot!

I loved it =] itz really good relates 2 me

It's astounding, you did wonderful with the structure, and the poem is very powerful...cheesy as that may sound!
I absolutely adore this poem, you should do more in the future!

this is just the way my life was I was a good girl and then my life changed and I did some things...