What do you think of this song i wrote

Verse 1]

You said that countless years has gone by with no big suprise
And there's no differance between this or the last
You said it;ll just be like the other times
From the longest day's to the longest night's
To the every second that ticks by
To the...

empty bottles, can't sleep at night
It's just no suprise that your half a life
Your living half a live

[chrous]

So if you need someone to call
I;ll be there listening to every word
Day or night, I never turn my back
If you need someone to belive in you
I let you know I will

[verse 2]

You said this mess is starting to become your worst defence
And your locked into the past tense
You said you've been fighting a war so many times
Against the longest days and longest nights,
Your still living half a life
Your living half a life

[chrous]

So if you need someone to call
I;ll be there listening to every word
Day or night, I never turn my back
If you need someone to belive in you
I let you know I will

Bridge]

From the longest day's to the longest night's
To the every second that ticks by
To the empty bottles, can't sleep at night
It's just no suprise that your half a life
Your living half a live

[chrous]

So if you need someone to call
I;ll be there listening to every word
Day or night, I never turn my back
If you need someone to belive in you
I let you know I will

I am 14 and in a band, I will combine the music on monday, this is not about me, this is for a friend

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I think it is really good .. I really like it ... wow I wish I could right stuff like this you are really talented

I want to hear it!! I really like it

I LOVE it can I be your friend?