What do you think of these lyrics??

This is a song I wrote about being stuck in a situation where you are in no power and feel trapped while watching your dreams and everything you wanted to do with your life pass you by

I know it won't sound with out knowing the melody, but oh well tell...

me what you think

Everything's falling apart you're breaking down,
What once held you together can not be found.
Feeling so alone and so distraught,
You know they can read your every thought.

Hear the voices call/ Feel the padded wall
Don't know what to do/ They're coming right for you

Chorus:
No Escape,
No freedom in sight
No escape,
Drifting through the night
No escape,
Hear you ask of me
No escape,
When will you be free?

You've been here so long can't get away,
Just can't stand it here another day
Struggling to take another breath,
You know you'll be here until your death

See the people stare/ This is so unfair
Reaching for the knife/ Try to end your life

Repeat Chorus

Watching your dreams slowly drift away,
Know you'll never take back those lost days
See those dimming lights there at the end,
Just wishing that you could start again

Everything is gone/ This is your swan song
All the things you are/ Never got you far

Repeat chorus

Lyrics are Copyright of Martest. All rights reserved

Don't steala my Lyricas...

I love it. I'd totally listen to this.

amazing work I sang it to myself in a dark lonley voice with a poetic melody

I quite like that, very easy to play a tune to aswell yeah think its great

GANGSTA...:::ONE THOUSAND 9

I think its something id possibly listen to as well since Im such a mess haha. all in all, I think it would be good as a song or as a poem.