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Okay what do you think of this song I wrote?

                   Verse 1

What if the castle was just a house? What if instead of a horse, all you had was a mouse? I would trade my glass slippers for sneakers As long as I don’t have to hear the music comin through the speakers

~Bridge~ All my dreams ever did was fail I’m done living a broken fairytale.

Chorus: All prince charming did was lie And after that I don’t even wanna try Last night I fell asleep crying on the staircase Maybe Neverland isn’t such a happy place I’d gladly fade out of the fairytale, go on to something better I’m sure Snow White would, too if the dwarves would let her

Verse 2 I’d leave without the horse-drawn carriage To get away from a planned marriage I wish that with just one dance, You’d get swept into a perfect romance

~bridge~ x2

Chorus

End: I thought I’d be happy being a Princess, But finding happiness in a perfect life isn’t a big success

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Answer #1

well in verse 1, yeahh it was kinda weird. It was pretty much just saying how someone would trade everything to get away from what the way things were.

Answer #2

thats fantastic! (: I really really like the first verse, but the rest of the song is still as good ! :) x

Answer #3

wow I love this its so good I mean it and to pakichan whos says appart frm verse 1 he is wrong you should deff write more.

This one is excelent EmilyJean xx

Answer #4

That’s really nice :) Love it.

~AnimalInsanity x

Answer #5

thumbs up apart from verse 1

Answer #6

thats accually really good, I think its great

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