Stolen virginity (( poem))

Trapped in a memory,
No way to break free,
I hope you're glad,
With what you've done to me.
The memory still haunts me,
It always will,
There's no way to heal it,
No plaster or pill.
No matter what,
This memory will stay,
There's no way to...

remove it,
It's a permenant stain.
I can't escape the past,
So I don't even try,
The amazing thing is,
That I did not cry.
But I grew up that day,
I left chilhood for good,
Growing up at age eight,
I never thought that I would.
You stole my childhood,
And my innocence too,
And my virginity,
Was not meant for you.
You had the power,
You had your way,
Then you were gone,
Then you ran away.
You left my life,
I've not seen you since,
But you plague my mind,
You make me sick.
As my brother's best friend,
You were easy to trust,
So I followed you willingly,
The fool that I was.
You pulled me down,
And brought your face close to mine,
I've nightmares of it still,
You succeed everytime.
You removed my knickers,
Then pulled down your pants,
I tried pushing you away,
With my own little hands.
I did not scream,
I've no idea why,
As you took me by force,
I looked into your eyes.
You seized my lips,
Before claiming my tongue,
Pulling me close to your chest,
You declared feelings of love.
I hear those words still,
I hear them everyday,
They're stuck in my mind,
They will not go away.
You could not have meant them,
Not if you did that,
You left a bad memory,
That I can't give back

What you think???

love it thats all I got to say

love the short.. piercing lines..hope to god its not 100% true : /

love it though

I like it a lot is it based on true events??

omg dats is good and I almost cryed and I feel srry for tha girl in tha poem,it makes stop and think...

I loved it. It was really full of sentiment, you made me cry. I hope that didnt happen to someone near you. I would follow the bastard and kill him with my own hands!!

wow pure...
did that really happen?
I didnt stop reading it until I got the end
hun it was a good poem, but it kinda felt like it was real.
so I dont like it in that sence.

omg made me tear up a lil...it was really gud. but aside from the the description of what physicly happen of the poem I felt it lacked some things like dont get me wrong it must have been a trimatic exprience but I dont think you put as much power into your words as you could have. like you didnt say how you really felt inside or the exact thought that was in your head when it was happening. it was great I juss wish you had put more emotion in it. hope I didnt offend you.

woww pure! you can wrote!!
but its sooo touching! and scary, it ached my heart!
is it what happend to u??? I hope not! :0
wowo.. relaly meant something
im writing it down in my poem journal thou =]