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Should i give this poem to my boyfriend?

Asked by fau 2 months ago, 1 answer.

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I've been trying to write all my feelings down
And give them to you when you come to town
But the words I write always seems to cheesy
So I scribble them out wishing this would be easy
But I'm determined to try just one more time
Though my...

words arnt worth a dime
Yet I hope you read this and I hope you care
For I've been thinking for hours just for words to share
So here I go again, trying one more time
Sitting here listening to that window chime

I know I'm indecisive and always say to much
And when we talk about some things, I often tend to blush
I'm not very smart and that I can admit
And sometimes I have swearing fests, f*ck you, little sh*t!
I also tend to worry way more then I should
But really I would stop all that if I thought I could
I guess I really need to try to change all my ways
Maybe then I wouldn't have so many awful days
I really don't mean to act that way, its all just from my past
But I will try real hard this time, and hopefully make it last

You really mean so much to me, and I don't want you to go
For when ever I'm with you, my eyes, they seem to glow
I really don't want to lose you, not now and never then
But when everything's going good, I act like a freak again
I hope you know its just because I often feel nervous
It gets so bad that sometimes I even seem brainless
Its all just because I like you, love would be the better word
Yea I think of it as love, I hope that doesn't sound absurd
I think I should go now, for I think I've said enough
But just keep in mind, that none of this was bluff

Answered by fau on Sep 11, 2009, 10:56PM

also does it sound done?

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