Poem 2 of my life

sadness its funny
like riding in a car
none stop when it does
it hurts and the pain kicks in
as you hold back you try to
but never works

like fire as it burns your soul it
gets darker and darker
you run and run to put it out
but it doesnt happen...

it still burns

when you rise above you have a great fall
and when you hit the ground you wanna die
but you cant as you fall you relise
you have a purpose and need to live
when you start falling you wish you hadnt
rose above
(doesnt it feel good being on the bottom)
cause you dont take a hard fall
its light as a feather
as you float down people catch u

its funny how sad you really are

wow austin,
thats really good!

that was really good.
and deep too, it takes some thinking for this one, nice (:

your truly an amazing writer... and I think that your poetry is some of the best I've read!! keep on writing!!