Will you read my song and give me feedback?

Blinded by your presence
By ANNA B
from Bk, NYC!

Verse One
To be in your arms, to call your name.
The warmth of you touches me.
I've waited so long, patiently.
Can you believe it too?

Verse Two
To see your eyes in real life.
To have listen to every...

word I utter.
It means so much to be embraced finally.
You have no idea, I finally feel complete.

Chorus
And I've been waiting and waiting for this day.
Now I'm here in front of you.
I am in a dream, speechless on what to say.
I can express my love freely.
All I know from this moment I have seen the truth.
All this time, I've been blessed because of you.

Verse Three
To see my life through new eyes, to be re born.
To know my life has a meaning.
I won't stop believing in you.
Cuz only I know what I feel deep inside.

Pre -Chorus
Critics may say I'm crazy and over my head.
But you don't know what it's like until you believe.
And I know your in my dreams while I sleep.
You guide me to my destination.
(Just don't let go cuz I would be lost without your pure love)
( You keep on saving me in your arms.)

Chorus repeat

Bridge
( Can you ) stay with me?
( Will you) listen to my cries?
I know I love you more than I can explain.
I wish I could remember the scent of your skin
I can't believe i hugged you so many times.
You're one of a kind.Yeah...

Breakdown
You comforted me through my greatest fears.
And you guided me with your steady hand.
I believe in your song, until the day I die.
It's a spiritual connection, I can't deny.
( You're my truth. You're the one I can't be without)
I wanna tell the whole world that ...

Chorus- repeat

!!
thats really good! do you have a band? if yeah then you should definately get that one out.

i just hope the tune is a good one,
x