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My first love poem that i wrote!!

Asked by cheerful0292 about 1 year ago, 7 answers.

Okay. This was the first love poem that I wrote. I hope you like it.

When you're with your friends, you act like I'm not around,
When I call, you say that you don't hear a sound.
Apparently my love wasn't enough
To get through your armour, thick...

and tough.
My heart began to grow a heavy shield,
Uncovering secrets and my power revealed.
The next time you look into my eyes, you won't see grey,
Instead you will see what you did to me on that day.

Put any comment you like.

Answered by jazzy0304 on Oct 30, 2008, 02:24PM

IT'S REALLY GOOD...I LOVE IT!!! GOOD JOB! =)!!!

Answered by cheerful0292 on Oct 30, 2008, 02:28PM
111 answers

wow thanks.

Answered by nataly_luv on Oct 30, 2008, 04:04PM
99 answers

LOVING IT!!!
haha your good =]

Answered by aquamarine1316 on Oct 30, 2008, 04:38PM
148 answers

Bravo! *clapping* that was so good! I love it.

Answered by cheerful0292 on Oct 30, 2008, 04:53PM
111 answers

if you guys want, I can make you a personal poem. just fun mail me a topic. Give me a week or so, and I will get you an amazing poem of your own! and thank you for saying that I am so good. So is my bffl, EMODANCER. Check out her poems, because she is also awesome.

Cheerful0292