Is this flow good for a 13 year old

Tell Me What you Think.

Life tight
until you get stab by a knife
everyday I see kids having their child's play
knowing one of these days
we're all going to ash
I want to blast
the devil off his a**
this is real rap
I never take a nap
because...

to me that's like a death trap

WOW!
that's all I have to say.

this flow sucks, you arent a gangster whos going around stabbling and killing people

blerg shutup.
Thats amazing, I have a lot of friends that are pretty good rappers, they have already released CD's in stores and junk but they didn't get good until they were in their later teens.
For a 13 year old thats amazing, way to go!

its crap

There is no flow, only rhyme. The kids trying to hard to make it rhyme without taking into consideration the flow of it. There doesn't seem to be a goal of this little poem.
Give the kid a English literature book and teach them how to write poems before jumping into rap. Poems give meaning, flow and understanding whilst rap will make it sound good when sung.

However, When said it sounds like something a 13 y/o would say and think of though, so it's average.

Cool Homeboy,now listen to more rap study on how they Do they Flows and all that sh*t!

Cool Homeboy,now listen to more rap study on how they Do they Flows and all that sh*t!