Is this a good rock song?

I wrote this song for my rock band. it is copywrited I just want to see what everyone thinks. we just sstreet perform right now.

your making me do this
you see right through
I know just what you want
but I wont give it to you

Get out of my...

house!
Get off my floor!
Shut your mouth
And walk out out the door

Im not like the other girls
that whine and complain
I think you should run
because im sure im going insane

nothing you say is going to change my mind
your not as slick as you may think you are
make sure you know that im one of a kind
you better change your bad behavior

Get out of my house!
Get off my floor!
Shut your mouth
And walk out out the door

one minute you want me
and the next im not so sure
that you even see im different
from all the girls before.

(band solo.. then slow down again)

you better believe that in all ym grace
ill still slap that look right off your face
im still your honey I swhat you say
its all in black and white
and forget the shades of gray

Get out of my house!
Get off my floor!
Shut your mouth
And walk out out the door

You act so great
but I think its to late
for your your alabies
just telling lies!!!

so say goodnight
and get out of my sight
dont know how you can do this
is this really the way you want to stear?
no need to wait cause wont spill no tear

Get out of my house!
Get off my floor!
Shut your mouth
And walk out the door.

in my opinion, it rhymes wayyy to much

Looks more like a poem than it does a rock song

yeah, it rhymes too much it sounds like a poem.
I guess it was okay?

sometimes the rhymes is what makes a song solid, I liked it:]

I like it I think wit da right beat I think it will b hott

Sounds a little too Dr. Seussish. Not every two lines have to rhyme.