Is this a good beginning for a song?

“(softly)They say home is where the heart is But my heart is lost somewhere at hooome.

(a little stronger) If my heart is at home I need to fiind it. I need to find it. (a little stronger) I need to find it. (really strong) Come help me fiiind iiit!” what do you think? lol Btw it sounds better than it looks lol

Answer #1

I think its awesome

Answer #2

thanks!

Answer #3

I love it xD

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