Guns and roses - new song

I wrote this song while my internet was off,it's like a comedy but yet a bit true song I call Guns and Roses

Getting bullied so much at school and out I'm just not so sure what to do
I tell teachers about the issue but they always say Let it blow...

over,you'll get through
They never see what I see everyday - stupid a**e* with guns thinking their tough
What will those piece of metal do besides kill me I'm already half dead inside
Telling me Man fu*k you,you not worth my time
What was the point of all this is what I'm thinking
Bully me and threaten to kill me but never told me what you wanted
They obviously don't know my history or what I've gone through these past few years
Maybe I should show them then they'll get me better and hopefully tonight they'll clean their filthy ears

Guns kill you but roses heal you
One of these days I'm gonna day and who will they pick on then
I just want a better life and maybe they'll all leave me be
Cause I - am so tired of being bullied

Watching my back at every corner I turn
I just don't feel right having something so valuable on me and know it will soon be stolen
Nice a** neighborhood but fu*ked up people that live here
Wow I wonder if I can carry something so not worth it like a chair
Sometimes I wonder if I'm just in my wonderland while everybody else is normal
Good question but whos to answer I'm the target and I am more nocturnal
Why do people think I'm just alive to play a stupid killing game
I'm human treat me like one but oh I forgot all the people that live here are all just so lame
It's hard to tell when they're wearing ski masks and carrying guns from a 99 cent store
Oh wow so scary someone call the police or are you guys just bored

Guns kill you but roses heal you
One of these days I'm gonna day and who will they pick on then
I just want a better life and maybe they'll all leave me be
Cause I - am so tired of being bullied

Getting out of bed every damn morning to the same stinky house and family
Gross not the way I wanna grow up or be for a long time being
Or is this something from the wealthy that everybody likes to call jealousy
I live in a fucked up room for fu*k sake get it through your head
Or should I take a rock-hard stone and bash it through your head and make you permanently brain dead
Mess with you'll get a fake gun to your mouth and after that you will in fact bleed
But wait it wasn't me that threatened you bullt please don't call the police
I beg you it wasn't me fuck what is wrong with you are you just retarded
No I didn't mean that you know I didn't what the fuck is coming out my mouth
I need to get out of here

Guns kill you but roses heal you (2x)
One of these days I'm gonna day and who will they pick on then
I just want a better life and maybe they'll all leave me be
Cause I - am so tired of being bullied

(deep voice)
Guns may kill you but roses do for sure heal you
Not my fault you made some idiotic choices yes you do
Can't deny it cause I was there who threatened those people who nearly called the police
Hahaha it was me but can you prove it oh shit I'm talking still
That other person was for sure not me

Guns kill you but roses heal you (4x)
One of these days I'm gonna day and who will they pick on then
I just want a better life and maybe they'll all leave me be
Cause I - am so tired of being bullied

What do you think of it?

song written by maggot4
song influenced a bit by Eminem

no comment...

^ well the post above me was rude. -_-

uhmm...I thought it was pretty good. :D

pretty good.