Do think this is a good poem?

Do you think this is a good poem:

A boy and a girl
Growing up in this world
They chanced to meet
One of those coincidences

They happened to talk
A boy and a girl
They liked what they heard
They spoke in seriousness and jest

About topics that would shape the world
And those that shaped their lives
A boy and a girl
Something happening

They were there for eachother
They cared for each other
They were in love with each other
A boy and a girl

Hey masterzxo95. Remember me???

It's very sweet. I would word it a little differently but it's from your heart. That's all that counts. She won't care if it was good or not. You'll get credit for thinking about it.

Take care.

Yes, it's so endearing.

the idea is really sweet, but try 2 work on the wording a little, like lostwife said

aww thats really sweet.
and yea, its an excellent poem!

I love how you moved the line down in each stanza.
very unique =)

like I said on your profile wow.