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Could you rate my poem from 1 to 5??...

Asked by vladlust about 1 year ago, 7 answers.

Could you rate my poem from 1 to 5???...
1 would be,the lowest
And 5 would be the highest...

Just want to know if it is good...
So I could present it 2 d class...???

Youve sang my agonizing harmony,
Youve painted colors on my sight,
Youve...

lighten up my dim world,
Youve found me unconcious
And woven my wounded heart.

But why???, words pitched at me,
Your gaving it all up,
You throw it all away,
That hurtful words was killing me inside,
You left me broken hearted.

Baby,its hard on me to tear myself away from you,
Nor, I dont want to be a fright and pretendings everythings alright.
No!, I wont even sit here and die...

Im ganna lick d knife
W/ all my tears...
Im ganna embrace d chain,
W/ all my blood,
Im ganna scream w/ d gun,
W/ all my heart,
Im ganna swallow swords,
W/ all my pride,
Just 2 have you again.

So this time, im ganna throw it all away,
One hundred forty three words...

I love you..!!!

^^...
Thnx...^^

Answered by wasagirl on Nov 18, 2008, 09:37PM
13 answers

5 that was excellent!!!

Answered by bonitasonyadore94 on Nov 19, 2008, 12:46AM
21 answers

5 that was really really good

Answered by vladlust on Nov 19, 2008, 06:35PM
15 answers

haha...

sure on your votes guys???...

because im still really nervous to present it...T_T

maybe something get wrong...T_T...

I hope I could get high grades on it...T_T

Answered by gohenry111 on Nov 19, 2008, 08:27PM
16 answers

Answered by funadvice on Nov 23, 2008, 02:21PM
53843 answers

OMG I LOVE IT!!!
5

Answered by mabelmaymay244 on Dec 13, 2008, 01:35PM
240 answers

5!!! that's so goodd!!

Answered by theschminger on Jan 07, 2009, 11:58AM
23 answers

2. The first stanza was acceptable, even if it had a glaring lack of punctuation. The rest is honestly rubbish--something everyone else writes. Actually, the first stanza was, as well. Just awful.
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