Are these hardcore/screamo/alternative lyrics good?

The Sky Is Exploding On The Horizon

(Intro)
(Spoken to screaming)
The sky is exploding on the horizon
And it is an unbelievable sight.

(Instrumental Breakdown)

(Verse)
(Sing) Hold it close, don’t let it go
(Scream) Escaping your grasp, it slips...

away
(Sing) That feeling of trust is gone
(Scream) And it will never come back

(Chorus)
(Sing) Transforming, I will
(Scream) Stay clear of you, you’re dangerous
(Sing) Writing names, I see
(Scream) The pain you’ve wrought, yet the relief
(Sing) It’s obvious, removing
(Scream) Them from the world 

(Breakdown)
(High) You’ve brought upon
(Low) Us a new threat. (Squeal)
(High) Your vision of
(Low) A perfect world (Squeal to high)

(Verse 2)
(Sing) Cleansing the world, you say
(Scream) That this is right, you’re playing God
(Sing) You cannot play God
(Scream) You’re not God, no one is.

(Chorus)

(Breakdown)
You are notorious
The name you’ve given yourself
Cleansing the world of sin
Yet sinning to achieve it

(Heavier Breakdown)
You are
Kira
Beware
Kira
Kira (Squeal)
Kira (Squeal)

(Chorus)

:::Just so you all know, this song is about kira, the killer of a show by the name death note he kills people by writing their name in his deathnote.:::

Well I like it. Thats cool dude!

Sounds really awesome.

they are wicked

They're amazing lyrics! thats the kinda stuff I TRY to write.