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I write poems And i guess I'd love some feedback/ criticism.

And I dunno. I just decided to put this link up here. :) Would love it if I could get some feedback on my writing. Also, it’s just for anyone who’d like to read it. :) Thaaaanks! x)

http://hellopoetry.com/-ayushi-a/

:)

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Answer #1

I like the site layout, might have to invade it with my creations…BUT…I cant give you any advice as poems that dont ryhme dont make sence to me,never have.I would love to say they are great poems but as I have never been one to read non-ryhme ones , I cant say.Thing is it is hard to get honest replys as people dont like saying negative things.If you like myself want to develop your poetry skills you need pointing in the right direction,constructive critisisum is whats needed.Good luck ,and what ever anyone says dont matter if you enjoy what you write.

Answer #2

I’m with badboyvibes, I know nothing about poems. However, I believe the story behind them all were very nice! I especially liked “My Precious”. Good job! Keep writing!

Answer #3

Thank you (: I’m really glad you liked it!

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