Who can help me put this into a poem

Okay I know your gona Say its Kinda Good Alredy. but with another person help. it be even better.. I was wondering could any of you help me put this into a rhyming poem! so it sounds really amazing! Even if you try to and not that good at it please do because it gives me more ideas Thanks !

I could never explain why I love you so much, It’s your eyes, your smile, your soft gentle touch. You were on my mind when I woke up this morning remembering your smile I guess the next time I’ll see your face will take a little while I was remembering your arms around me love the way they always feel warm with you by my side I completely feel no harm I was remembering your voice makes my heart skip a beat but without you baby my whole body’s weak The more I think, the more I weep, at least I have memories to keep I miss you more than words can say, I think of you each single day I’ll always love you til the end I get this amazing feeling from my head down to my toes, I cant explain it I’m like the only one who knows You can’t image how crazy you’re driving me. I feel like nothing will ever be same. It’s like being in hell for all eternity. Just replaying a horrible game I’ll always love you, Nothing can take that away. I just don’t know what to do! I wish I could be the one by your side Telling you everything’s gonna be alright I wish I could be the one who falls asleep next to you at night And the one you make up with after a fight I knew that you was special I could tell right from the start Is that I remember every word Every single thing you says Everything I’ve heard For You Are The One by Zach For you I would climb The highest mountain peak Swim the deepest ocean For its your love I seek. For you I would cross The rivers most wide Walk the hottest desert To have you at my side Hoping one day you will change your mind

Answer #1

wow that was very sweet dis is 4me and my boyfriend kerrel u=he meanns everything 2me so keep doing the great work

Answer #2

I could never explain why I love you so much, It’s your eyes, your smile, your soft gentle touch. I awoke this morning with you on my mind I guess I won’t see you for a while, It’ll take quite some time.

I was remembering your arms around me. I loved the way they always felt so warm. with you by my side, I completely felt safe.

I was remembering your voice, so sweet. The way it made my heart skip a beat but now being without you, baby It makes my body feel so weak.

The more I think, the more I cry. atleat I’ll always have the memories, but I can’t help to wonder why? I’ll always love you til’ the end, for you are my love, my closest friend.

I get this amazing feeling from my head down to my toes, I cant explain it, Will I only be the one to ever know? You can’t image how crazy you’re driving me. I feel like nothing will ever the be same. It’s like being in hell for all eternity. Just replaying a horrible game.

I’ll always love you, Nothing can take that away. I just don’t know what to do! I wish I could be the one who stands beside you. Telling you everything’s going to be alright.

I wish I could be the one who falls asleep next to you every night, the one you make up with after a fight. I knew that you were special, I could tell right from the start.

I remember every word, everything you’ve ever said. Everything I’ve heard you say.

For You Are The One, Zach For you I would climb, the highest mountain peak. Swim the deepest ocean, For its your love I seek.

For you I would cross, The rivers that are the most wide. Walk the hottest desert, To have you at my side Hoping one day you will change your mind

Answer #3

wow… thats really good. and every thing in that poem exsplains for me in my life. I feel the same way about this guy blake. its just wow. anyway your really good.

Answer #4

just need someone who can touch it up abit if you get me to satfiye me lol

Answer #5

sounds amazing to me

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