What do think of this poem thing I made

Ok I no this isnt very good because I s*ck at writing but what do you think…

The girl no one really knows…

 No one knows who I really am.
 Everyone sees me as a sweet responsible girl  who loves horses. 
 But on the other side of "that" girl theres a dark side.
        Nobody realizes,
        But its there...
        I do my best to hide it,
        But theres times when it escapes...
 On my dark side im filled with anger and hurt
  No one repects me for who I really am
  Im sick of being made fun of for beiong the horse gal that no one likes.
  Maybe I should just let the dark side take over.
  It might be better for everyone.
  That way I might fit in,
  But...
  No one knows who I really am...

Ok I think it s*cks but what do you think? I want you to be compleatly honest!!!

Answer #1

I love it! okay is that about u? must be but okay just do what makes you happy. if being nice/good makes you happy then do that. if being dark makes you happy then do that. or even if you like being in the middle.

Answer #2

I dont think its very good sorry

Answer #3

hey if thats about you I am right there with you. that was so deep. I looovvveeeddd it. you are so amazing. I hope that you write more.

Answer #4

I think it’s really good

Answer #5

its igghtt…lol sike nah it’s great

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