What are good ideas for a suspence story?

I need to write a ten page suspence story in third person & I need help with ideas.I need to be very descriptive & unique. Any ideas? Thanks:)

Answer #1

Oh my god! Oh my god… you have to get some help for me! I was about to leave my house but I saw it! Ran down to the basement with my laptop but I’m trapped down here! I don’t have a phone or anything! Oh my god… oh my god! It’s scrapping on the door!

Listen, call the NJ police… my name is Joshua I live on Lake Woobranda, at 424 lakeview place! Oh my god please help me! It’s right outside the door!

Answer #2

… sorry, I just had to go check out that noise. It’s totally creeping me out, but every time I go upstairs it gets real quiet. I swear I can hear someone breathing though… but it’s like their in the wall or something. My heart is pounding right now, but I think it’s just my imagination. Writing to you at least gives me a chance to take my mind off it. Anyway.. omfg… I just heard it again… I think I need to get out of my house!

Answer #3

I have a great idea for a short suspense story! It starts with this guy writing advice on the internet when all of a sudden– wait, oh man, that was so weird. I thought I heard something upstairs. Anyways getting back to my idea- so this guy is typing out this idea on the internet, and he’s all alone in his big old house.

Argg… I’ll have to get back to you in a second… I keep hearing this weird scraping sound upstairs.

Answer #4

hahahaha flossdaily made me smile,bt no help:(

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