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She watches her shadow as she walks Her hair responding to the wind And momentum Shoulders square Sun siphoning enthusiasm From behind

I gesture at the scattered sky For the sake of white-tipped gloves And wish the arrow-winged birds Would never vacate our field.

Please tell me what you think !

By: shannon ( something) Please dont steal it im very proud of what I write and I wouldnt steal another poets work do dont steal mine out of respect for wirters and writeing

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Answer #1

yeah I love it and yeah Shadowed Beauty would be great!

Answer #2

I love it, it’s fantastic, I’m a lyricist so I have a certain appreciation for talent, and that is exactly what you have.

Answer #3

your poem is awesome! So beutiful! I think you should call it “Her Shadow” !

                                 _ Hope I helped!

Answer #4

this poem is really good its unique, one of a kind, I love it… I would call it… shadowed beauty. :) hope I helped.

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