Isn't this a good Poem ?

MY NAME iS C0CAiNE:

Beware my friend ;my name is cocaine. coke for short. I enterd this country without a passport. Ever since then I’ve been hunted & sought; By Junkies and Pushers and plain clothes d*cks. Mostly users who need a quick fix.

Im more valued then Diamonds; more treasured than gold. Use me just once and you too will be sold; I’ll make a school boy forget his books; I’ll make a beauty queen forget her looks; I’ll take a reknown speaker and make him a bore; I’ll take your mama and make her a wh*re; I’ll make a school teacher forget how to teach; I’ll make a preacher, not want to preach.

All kinds of people have fallen under my wing. Just look around, you can see the results of my sling. I’ve got daughters turning on there mothers; I’ve got sisters robbing there brothers; I’ve got burglars robbing the lord’s house; I’ve got Husbands pimping there spouse.

I’m the king of crime and the prince of destruction. I’ll cause the organs of your body to malfunction; I’ll cause your babies to be born hooked. I’ll turn the honest of men into crooks; I’ll make you rob, steal & kill. When your under my power you have no will.

Remember my friend ,my name’s Big “c” Some people call me the white lady; I’ve destroyed actors,polliticians and sports heros I’ve decreased bank accounts from millions to zero; I’m a bad habit, too tuff for man. I’ve caused the law to invest in the Baller-ram.

Yeah, I’m raising hell all over america. Don’t belive me just check out your news cast I’ve got them standing on the corners yelliing “crack” or “rock” I’ve made it wher, shootings & stabings are common on the block.

Well; now you know,what will you do ? Remember, my friend, It’s all up to you. If you decide to jump into my saddle, you better ride me well. For on the white horse of cocaine, I’ll ride you straight to helll.

:] I found it. a preacer wrote it. I like it. it teaches you well :]

Answer #1

THIS IS THE REAL POEM… some words in the one above are incorrect. I put ** next to the correct lines.

“My Name Is Cocaine” by Larry Jackson

My Name is Cocaine - call me Coke for short. I entered this country without a passport.

Ever since then I’ve made lots of scum rich. Some have been murdered and found in a ditch.

I’m more valued than diamonds, more treasured than gold. Use me just once and you too will be sold.

I’ll make a school boy forget his books. I’ll make a beauty queen forget her looks.

I’ll take a renowned speaker and make him a bore. I’ll take your mother and make her a wh*re.

I’ll make a teacher forget how to teach. I’ll make a preacher not want to preach.

I’ll take all your rent money and you’ll be evicted. I’ll murder your babies, or they’ll be addicted.

I’ll make you rob, and steal, and kill. When you’re under my power, you will have no will.

Remember, my friend, my name is “Big C”. If you try me one time, you may never be free.

I have destroyed many actors, politicians and heroes. I’ve decreased bank accounts from millions to zero.

I’ll make shootings and stabbing a common affair. Once I take charge, you won’t have a prayer.

Now that you know me, what will you do? You’ll have to decide - it’s all up to you.

Listen to me, and please listen well, When you ride with Cocaine, you’re headed for hell.

Answer #2

I think it’s…pretty good ^^

Answer #3

Yeah it s awsome! I really think everyone should read it, hopefully, people read this and understand what it is saying!

Answer #4

Looks like it Glorifies a drug that destroys lives, relationships, careers,and families.

Answer #5

its awsome, and im definatly against drugs, from cigarets to heroin they can all kiss my @$$

Answer #6

I really like it.I don’t know bout yall.

:]

I stay away from drugs.

Answer #7

I like coke. Good poem,

Answer #8

People should read this. Its good.

Drugs ruin lives

Answer #9

Wow… I like it, it really speaks to you on how much drugs suck.

Answer #10

wow that is an awsom poem. teenagers should have to read that !

Answer #11

Yeah, I like it. I’m anti-drug.

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