Do these lyrics make sense?

Can somebody tell them if these lyrics make sense and sound like something that could turn into a great song to them. Please!

Oh, a new baby was born to start off this day He has your name and he says that he’s here to stay This blessing could mark the end of your days He says that god said it would turn out this way

This is the day that our marches on. We could turn back, but we choose to stay Why can’t you turn around as I stare you down I know this love will be the end of our days

How could we have let this happen This blessed thing that has leaped into our lives He’s crying out as he calls our names to him We’re here to put an end all of this suffering

We let these lies all pile high There’s no bottom to this mess of mine As I pray to god for his help A new strength has arisen inside of my soul And yet we let it drag us down This worthy gift that we care so much about Is this a sin of what we’ve created?

My careless mistakes have lead me to believe otherwise There’s no hope or escape this time Oh, yes this will surly be the end of our time How could I ever believe otherwise

How could we have let this happen This blessed thing that has leaped into our lives He’s crying out as he calls our names to him We’re here to put an end all of this suffering

This was the day our loved marched on We took things way too far for good Now we’re left here to pray and repent For things can get better in the end

Oh, a new baby was born to start off my day He has my name and he says i’m here to stay This blessing could mark the end of my days I said that god told me I would believe some way

Answer #1

eh its okayy.. if it turned out int a song id probably not listen to it unless it had like sick guitar solos or something. but other then that ehhh

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